You should add a smiley, frontal of your face on the top and differing pictures on the bottom left side... Other then that it looks good. The seen is solid and the music is fucking kickin. I love the colors. They look very nice and also match the furniture hahaha. Maybe a bolder and bigger title even. Other than that it looks realllllly good. (trying to use up my last 30 words... Lol) la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la. OH BTW your really cool your a very talented person Calgarc -Kaylee
If I see badly constructed page I don't stay on them. Alternatively I use my artsy powers to throw badly drawn meteorites onto the server hosting the page. It hasn't worked so far, but it will succeed one day.
-Kaylee
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